i am so far from what i once knew
i see their faces turn away
remember the times when i loved you
when we had so much to say
there is nothing left of me within
i am no longer a part of your lives
as continue to live in sin
my memory lost in time
i watch you all move on
leaving me behind
having so much fun
and thats what makes me smile
that you all have evolved
i watched you heart break
all the problems that i used to solve
i let it happen for only your sake
we have been friends for so long
but now it is time to say goodbye
so you can all live your lives
blood red tears of pride
are the tears that i now cry
Author notes
option 2
it's about being pushed away from what yew love...not being involved...losing them although they are right there with yew
and having to exept it because you love them and you want them to move on and grow etc
A contest entry
- Silenced angels :) by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
1000 points, ended August 17, 2007, 28 entries
Honorable mention
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i know this feeling! A good write from the heart> i thank you for entering this well expressed poem!!
good luck in the other contests too!
take care xxxxx -
Best friends often times have to go separate paths. No worries cause some how, in a weird way life circles em back again. It may only be for a brief moment, but it does happen. The write was full of emotion and was clearly felt!
Thanks for entering my contest; you did a great job! -
this was wonderful because it was from the heart and i could feel the pain and sadness within it. i shall noe DQ this because i thought this was wonderful and you spoke out within it.
well done and best of luck
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