You enrolled
In Gods army
And was posted to me
To stand front line
In the frontier of love.
He gave you a gun
Of loving heart
An automatic that
Shot unconditional
Blessed care.
You fought every battle
Of toddler years
The hero of my
Rebellious teens
When you stood guard
Until I saw my way in life.
You are the bravest of the brave.
God and I up rank you
To the highest
And decorate you
With The medal of Honour.
Then I will enrol
In that army of god
And wishing that my battles
Will never be as hard as yours.
Mother,
I salute you.
Author notes
lady ireland
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A contest entry
- A Mother's Love by Darc Soul.
450 points, ended August 31, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Notes To Your Mom by midnight eyes.
500 points, ended January 10, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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YAY!!!
Wonderful sentiments to good old Mom!!! Best of luck in this contest, dear poet of the heart and soul!!!!
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This is beautiful Poet. I really think you got the idea of what I was looking for. I love this!!! =) THANK YOU!!! =)
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Very Powerful,
What a truth your poetic piece bestows,
you really weaved a beauty here. Awesome~
Thanks for sharing,
and all the best to ya in the contest!
Much love and light~
-Timothy
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Hello Tim!
Yeah we can't be without mum now can we?
I only hope that my children will think the same of me. lol.
i really appreciate you stopping by to comment
and to award your applause.
Slán agus gra
Dolores x
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