These sour candy story lines are too much for you to handle,
Sweetie.
So I’ll let the record play,
Anything to drown out your barbied up apologies.
[theyaremeaningless]
My shredded ♥ beats faster than your whole one ever could
[ill.never.get.my.11:11s.back]
Author notes
PaintedParisPassion
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A contest entry
- *L.o.s.t, H.u.r.t.&&C.o.n.f.u.s.e.d* by Logans-Mommy.
500 points, ended August 2, 2007, 49 entries
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this is totally on my bookmarked.
and that just made me smile.
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I never quite understood what 11:11 meant... Time? I don't know, always confused me. Another expressive one babe, keep up the great dp!
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This was short, yes so wonderfully written. I love it, and the idea of you wanting your '11:11's' back.
[great.job&thanks.for.entering!]
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My questions...what the 11:11's? I don't know I'm really retarded...lol. Though the ones I've read so far, I have to sooo much more to go , are short, they get straight to the point and tell you want you wanna here. Some serious f*ck you, not even worth my breathlessness!
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Very good, short, but sweet. I like it. =]
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i like this alot...the title was excellentand it was nice short and sweet...thanks for entering...good luck
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I like this.
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you are a stunning writer.
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good luck in the contest this was passible and sort of creative with a little bit more flames this would have been a great write ~ lady enthralling ~
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beautiful dahling.
loveeeed this write. =]] -
Ahhh, ish beautiful
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pahh the WHORE looked at this but didnt comment.
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lol, scroll all the way down on here.
:] silly.
But yea.
Stupid ass WHOOOOREEEEE is sooo right.
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I like the line "I'll let the record play to drown out your barbied up apologies" ...kinda reminds me of the time i first heard "Girlfriend" I wished for you on 11:11 again tonight
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i love how you manage to capture the heart of a topic in just a few lines. beautiful.
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gah i know exactly what you mean about wasted 11:11's i think my page has something about that haha.
i used to make all my 11's about andrew, and now im just like why the fuck did i do that, i could have wished for something so much damn better.
boys are lame.
ifff you ever need to talk to someone, you know im still here for you right? because i am [:
this was amazing btw. im not sure if i said that yet, buttt im favortizing it
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Well done with this one!
Thanks for sharing it and
keep up the wonderful work
here! I think that I will
try that 11:11 star wishing
thing as well!
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Great write! I liked the first line a lot!
~Michaela!
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short and to the point but still effective. ending is good, would be even better if i understood what 11:11s wer
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11:11 is supposedly the best time to make a wish on a star at night. :]
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wow cool i'm gonna try it....
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Oh very emotional and expressional, and still very uniquely written! I like! =D
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oh i know that feeling, this is so creative, and its also quite nice looking. =]. its short but very expressive, i like it alot.
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