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A final fight.

I want to kick and scream
I want to fight
Let out my feelings...Those ones I have inside
Its hard stay calm, and still I try.

Why, Why do we live like this?
Just tell me how You feel
I'll try not to sound so pissed
Do you really love me or is this really a dream?
Cause dreams are never real.

With raging fisting
I tear apart our dying hopes
With your love ever seem right?
Sicklike I rememebered..that painful night
When everything and our everlasting love died.

Why, why do we live like this?
Just tell me how you feel
I'll try not to sound so pissed
do you really love...or this all a dream

Who's the sronger fighter?
there's no surprise
We war on together, blocking our hearts
are you still mine?

What happened to cause such acts?
distrust in our hearts leave them broken
and still mine bleeds for you

We're bothing gasping for air
ending this tirade at last
hand in hand
apologiies unspoken
But no theres no comfort in believing our love's true.


Lol well it kinda is a song..but I didnt add to many chorus breaks because I'd prefer it to be a poem right now.

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  • gdog
    August 6, 2007
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    call me eor
  • afirefly7
    August 1, 2007
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    other than a few spelling errors /LMAO ? this is a great write


  • Logans-Mommy
    July 26, 2007

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    well whatever it is, song or poem, its good, and i can relate to this, me and my boyfriend, yea, issues for a while. this is very good.