Laid before me you lounge as your figure seduces
Insatiable thoughts this tolerance you test
Wet passion enchants me your body produces
The scents of your oils and the aroma of your sex
Packaging passion wrapped loosely in veil
Silk bondage we play as the pressure applies
Upon body and mind as our thoughts seems to sail
Your anxiety builds as I whisper more lies
Of wants and yearnings and that which you wish
As I plunge within your lake of splendor
Reminiscence of those places and times that you missed
Orgasmic actions forgone I remembered
Soft Silk and tongue trace the trail of seduction
As we center on that single place in time
My hunger upon you, you seek some reduction
As ecstasy release body from mind
Restraints leaves no marks as satin holds tight
As you come you leave your thoughts behind
Memories and images recalled in the night
Lost within you, holding tight to the line
Between reality and fantasy that you take me to
I long to be in
And part
Of you
Author notes
This photo is of a beautiful poet on AP. She gave me the pleasure to write about her. It was my pleasure for sure
In a list
A contest entry
- Excite me~ In two ways by Whispered Devotions.
600 points, ended July 31, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How does the photo make you feel?
Comments
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I love poetry by men. they tend to write so beautifully about us. This was an excellent piece.
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Thank U - I was a good write for me as well
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this is nice poetry. Something I could take home to the lil lady and hope for the best. well written sensuality. congrats on the well deserved goldie.
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Thanks - its the way I really like to write. It has the undertones of sexuality but layered with sensuality.
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I fell in love with the 1st stanza. The depiction of the picture was on point. You seduce the reader with your words! I have to cool off!!!! I see why this won!! Godd job. Keep writing!
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Thank U M'Flow - the picture sent me some where. I loved it as well. I appreciate your comments, always.
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lovely and rich to enjoy!
I liked that metaphor device...I plunge in the lake
of your splendor...that was rich! This was really
lovely written, excellent build and flow to say the
least! Hey...congrats on the Gold!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : ))
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Thank U - its my pleasure always
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amazing seductive write, congrats on the gold, definately well deserved.
Tasha
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Thank U - thats my style. something everyone can take home to mom
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Excellent & exciting write...Congrats on the gold you truly deserved it....my Son!... novy
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Commenting on this again lovable swish
Still one of my faves and still sends shivers down my spine.
What more can be said? Oh yeah it's HOT!
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Oh My!
This was absolutely amazing my friend I see why you won this...w/o a doubt
Grat imagery in this HOT piece...love the photo
Very seductive...makmes me want to add mine online
CC♥
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thank you - she was stunning and the person that did the photo was so artistic. I loved it
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I can clearly see why you won a gold,
this was very enjoyable.
Full of hot passion.
Very sexy.
Great job.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Thank U - she stunned me when she said it was her picture. I had it almost done then I was a little cautious but It came out respectful I think.
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Nice
Very seductive, but where's the darkness? -
Stunning love this great erotic piece
Great job with this one
~fanning self~
delila
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LOL!! fan with both hands. Thanks so much 4 your great comments!!
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lol, it might be anonymous to some... I guess to people who don't know me they wouldn't think twice about the "aggression" taken with my picture.
I couldn't swallow after reading this... it left me without words or even breath. Talk about Hot and bothered!
*smiles* I personally thought this was HOT! Seriously I need to jump in a very very cold shower or something to tame this. The whole binding and trailing tongues done it for me. I have never been binded but I think now I wish to.
As you come you leave thoughts behind
Memories and images recalled in the night
Lost within you, holding tight to the line
Between reality and fantasy that you take me to
I long to be in
And part
Of you
That was simply breath taking. My favorite part by far! This whole piece enticed me to the up most degree of the word.
Amy
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If I was a shade lighter you would see my face flushed with pride. Thank you so much and I really am so glad U didn't feel uncomfortable with MY aggressive poem.
I saw your photo - your beauty and the artistic layout and - Boom it flowed from me. The enticing smile U gave showed me a secret thought that only U knew and we wished to know.
Here's my thought of being uncomfortable. There are too many folks because of what they think they know about others(photos, poems, U name it) that start 2 lust after folks and start stalking folks online and I didn't want you to think that of me.
Now for the writing - chains, belts, ropes. Naw, silk bondage with lite touching is more torturous than harsh bindings and you can go to work tomorrow without having to explain the marks If U read a few of my poems and profile, you'll see theirs nothing more beautiful than a woman. All shapes and sizes. Its the mental projection
I'm so glad U enjoyed it and really appreciate your comments
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Sent shivers down my spine
A beautiful sensual erotic write
sensational.
Hugs onesugar
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Thank you - a little aggressive with someones photo but I felt if this was an Anonymous photo I wouldn't feel so........shall I say uncomfortable. But I think it went nicely
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