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snow is my badstar

It was an early winter full of this heart untouched
Like a star sketched sky and a tainted lie
It was all drenched in ice
It was all too much

He came
With his valiant words
Earthbound and splintered
Dialed-up and wintered
Snow in his hands
He touch my heart

Searching upwards
And backwards
Finding me in every line
In every instance
In every time

The star of another life
If he weren't so far
We be together
Warming up the night

But for now
On this static screen of fate
You know who you are
You know what you make
You made it snow for me today

It snowing in my heart
And I wonder
Just how far, does far take
When snow covers distance in a blink

Copyright 2007 Kris Lynn

Author notes

In reality...it was snowing when I wrote this.

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  • snow is her badstar
    November 6, 2008
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    love her

    little known fact about this poem is Snow is the name of a person, not frozen rain =)


  • Death From Above
    July 27, 2007
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    Wow this is amazing. Glad to see you writing again its been awhile. I love your poetry.