Let me hold it in my hands
Your blood soaked, beating heart
I want to hold it as life fades
I want to know how death tastes
You stare at me with fading eyes
Uncomprehending, never understanding
Your mouth works in voiceless whispers
As I place my hand over your mouth
Watching life die, arousing me
Maniacal, my emotions
Kiss the blood stained lips of you
Taste the kiss of death
Bite the quivering mass of heart
Blood drips down my chin
Ambrosia, food of the Gods
Who knew Death tasted so good
Maggot infestation,
Add flavour to the brain
Keep the eyes, door to the soul
Jelly, melting on the flame
Pull my trusty razor
As it catches under your flesh
Filleting and skinning
Glee in bloody mess
Peeling back the dermis
See tissue and muscle, Oh God
Erotic necrophiliac fantasies
Of phallic memories
Carving your sex with hunger
Emotionless clit between my teeth
Manipulating bosom to do my will
Ejaculate, in deathstacy
Smell the sweet essence
Burning flesh, barbecue
Invite you all to dinner
Main course....You!
As I hold your severed hand
I'm filled with remorse
Twas not so long ago, we were friends
No wait...Now it's gone.
Author notes
Option 3
A contest entry
- Release Inner Anguish (Dark poetry from Dark poets) by Girl With Guitar.
1300 points, ended August 9, 2007, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sick and Twisted 2 by Acidanthra.
450 points, ended August 14, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me puke, I want the sickest shit out there by Aroarathebloody.
800 points, ended August 22, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Murderous Rage by hommie-t.
600 points, ended September 8, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Darker Than The Abyss by DancingShadowCorpse.
900 points, ended September 20, 2007, 91 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quest For The Darkest Writer In Town! by LadyDementia.
1050 points, ended January 25, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Blacker then the blackest black... by Miss Macabre.
700 points, ended June 16, 36 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Necrophilia! One of my favs! So sweetly sick, I may be drooling.
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nice story to it, and definitely vived,
you did a good job with this i was very intrigued when you told me of it, and got just what i expected, somthing so twisted that only this brother of mine could pen well done
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Thanks Rena Sis
Yeah, I was a little pissed off when I wrote this, and darkness took over
Glad you liked this write.
Thanks again
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This is so Very twisted and I like it!!
Good luck!
~Pastel
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Thanks very much
I'm glad you enjoyed this write. I had 'fun' writing it
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on it.
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The best compliment I think I could give you is simply to state: You....are Sick.
Nice write.
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Thankyou very much
I'm glad you enjoyed this write. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on it
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This gets better each time! Fantastic piece....I think I can safely say you are through! Awesome job..
Thanks for your entry and *good luck* in my contest!
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Congrats on the shinys!
Wowzer!! Speechless....good job I can still type Outstanding piece of darkness, brilliant!!
Maggot infestation,
Add flavour to the brain
Wickedly disturbing, great read, really loved it
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Thanks Lady
I like to do disturbing.
I'm glad you enjoyed this write
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if its disturbed I like, if its disturbed and gory I love! Keep penning excellence
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I have a couple more like this
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Really? I will have to check them out
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I'd be happy to send you the links in IM if you wish?
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Please! That would be great
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this is sooooo icky lol. It gave me shivers and I never want to eat meat again. congrats on the silver and bronze. thanks for sharing with the group too.
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Thanks very much I was annoyed when I wrote this piece..and when I'm annoyed...nothing is off limits, lol.
Thanks for the congratulations
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dude that is twisted awesomeness!! sweet!
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WOW! THIS IS AMAZING! I LOVE IT! KUDOS AND I WISH YOU THE BEST IN THE CONTEST. though, i'm not to sure you'll need the luck
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Thanks very much. I'll need the luck, trust me, lol. Glad you enjoyed this piece though
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ha, yeah, i definitely enjoyed it, it's hot as fuck! =D
Plus, i'm very twisted.....you might actually really enjoy some of my writing......you can check it out if you want
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cannibals make me happy
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This is good! I enjoyed every bite!
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Thanks very much I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. It was created in a moment of Anger....maybe I should be angry more often, lol. Thanks for reading and commenting
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Woaw..bro! the very darkest of them all ....did you put this on booksie..they would be traumatized...bravo..tips a broken glass to you ( as Dawn would say)
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It is on booksie, but only got 2 comments, lol. Maybe they're all in therapy? *Fills broken glass with blood* This is my darkest to date, I admit. maybe Dmonik has found what he was meant to do? Nice to hear from you again Thanks for rerading and commenting Sis
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And I thought 'His Masters Voice' was sadistic, Your stuff on Booksie was a bite on the bum...this is a knife through the womb!
I would give you some points or something but I'm still working all that out.
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lol! Dunno, there's only one way to find out......
As for points, You just click one of the 3 applause icons. You also get points for commenting, so yours will have started counting up now too
HMV was sadistic, but a shared experience, this was ALL DMONIK It's about time he came back and showed what he's capable off when annoyed, lol. Thanks Wych/Wolfy/Doo-daa, lol.
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I adore how you've personalised "Death" by capitalising it!! Excellent addition, it brings the piece to life! (Woot, go the pun
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Amazing work, truly amazing. The title and everything!
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oh yeah dark, twisted, sadistic, yep its all those things. What a vivid imagination, but wait thats whats so juicy about this piece of poetry. Well invisioned.
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Thankyou again. I was a little pissed off when I wrote this piece. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. It is darker than anything I've written beofre....maybe I should be angry more often Once again, thanks for reading and commenting.
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