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~*Is There Hope*~

I still fell there is hope
The words in side my head are unknown

People I see judge and talk
About the wars that I have faught

They dont know me but you do
Why must you leave I LOVE YOU

I cry day and night
Because i dont have you in my sight

I lay awake lost in my bed
With thoughts of you runnning through my head

Only a blade will save me frome my pain
All I have to do is just hit one vein

Then maybe you will realize what you had lost
A beautiful girl that is dead this is your cost

You threw me away without a chance
We couldn't at least have one finale dance

You will never know what would of happened
Because now I'm finally reasting in my own coffin.

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I just wrote this last night so plz tell me what you think......

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  • missin-my-Marine
    September 15

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    woah...

    this is really emotional but i know how this feels, im going through the same thing right now.
    i really love this poem, great write!