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Taste This Bitch

You say freak with one single touch.
I say please because I want this so much.
My tongue dances behind my lips with each sensation from your finger tips.
Embracing the disgrace god made you to be, I long for the misplacement be left in me.
Begging on my knees. I won't show my weakness if you show no mercy, please?
Lust.Gluttony.*Love*.Greed.
It's all the same to me.
Pretty. Sadly. I yearn for you so badly.
Fuck your brains out? Gladly... if you'll let me.
Penetrate the only parts I have left to break.
But for goodness sake, let me be all that you take...
You say bitch with one single desire.
Let me fullfill you with my fire.
I want to be everything you feel. Everything that'll heal.
Strip me down to something you can use.
I'm just afraid that they'll be nothing good left of you...
Just once in my life, I think it'll be nice to lose control...
just one more time. After a cigarette or two you'll be fine...
Mark my words which slowly drift between dripping fangs.
I hunger for only one...
The one who I wish to taste.

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  • Edna Sweetlove
    June 5, 2008
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    This is grotesque? Hardly. A bit lame and about as grotesque as a bunch of roses. Sorry about that.


  • She burns
    July 26, 2007

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    Oh so deep and powerful sometimes It's inside of me too, just wanna feel that beautiful thing sometimes, for everything we are and could be...


  • Blueskywonder
    July 26, 2007
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    Title is wicked also

  • Blueskywonder
    July 26, 2007

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    This is intensly hot... vividly passionate.
    Also this piece is a sensualy erotic piece
    leaving one itching with excitement
    An excellent piece! Well done... thankyou for taking the time to enter my competition

    (((BITE ME)))


  • blueyez
    July 26, 2007
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    wow ummm yeah! nice one! *rpse*
    peace and love

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