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Cold as the Sea...

Angels they may be,
Singing among the waves,
But with hearts cold as the sea.

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  • blankpage
    August 10, 2007

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    you should write novels, storys even screenplays, youe poetry has so much feeling, it puts you right in the middle of it, you have such a gift


  • Dark Whispers
    July 28, 2007

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    I love the background,it adds to the grace and beauty of the poem, thanks for entering
    ~~Dark
    Great write

  • Dark Whispers
    July 26, 2007
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    Prompt: sea angels