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Sonnet of a Better Life

Loving ones self is a difficult feat.
People telling you to raise your self-esteem.
You notice their concerns start to repeat.
So while they muss and fuss you begin to dream.

You dream of a life without pain.
Where cutting and suicide dont exist,
Self-love would be easy to obtain,
And no one watches blood excrete from their wrist.

Depression would be a myth
And love the only thing you need.
Everyone would have someone to be with
And no longer would we bleed.

I awake to their arguing once again
And realize this dream has come to an end

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~*♥Twisted Magic♥*~

By ♥♥Whisper Trinity♥♥

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  • Ami
    August 16

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    Wow this was amazing that last two lines were a great way to end this write Thank you so much for entering my contest and Good luck
    -♥Amy♥


  • blankpage
    August 10, 2007

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    can one create such a life through a mere dream.has any one tried,truly.imagine if one did. awsome story.


  • Dmonik
    July 28, 2007

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    If only life was like that. I enjoyed this immensley, it was well written, presented and thought out. Great work


  • XXDarkness-DecayXX
    July 26, 2007
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    I like it, Thank you for entering.