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Take my hand

Take my hand, and run away with me.
Search your heart as you do so,
so that you know that it is not a mistake.

Close your eyes my child and see for yourself.
look into your heart and tell me you can do better,
Let yourself go and believe.

Fallow the path peacefully as you go,
do not fear for I shall be by your-side.
Let go all your anguish and come along peacefully.

Take my hand dear child and I shall stop the yelling,
stop the hand of a lover from striking you once again.
Lift you heart from all the heart break and mistrust.

Look into my eyes and see for yourself.
give me your heart to hold on to as you go,
Let yourself go and believe.

Take the winding path one step at a time,
never look back at the fear and torment you have left behind.
Forget all the hurtful words said to you.

Take my hand dear child and I will show you.
A place were there are know more tears for you to shed,
Take that joyful laughter of yours and run.

Don't look back at all the screaming and yelling,
Take that beautiful path ahead and escape it all.
Don't worry they will never find you with me.

Run dear child, run with the other happy children.
Let the sun flow through your Blondie hair as you play as you never have,
Take in the sites that only you can do.

Take my hand dear child and run away with me.
Together we shall escape and go to a happy place,
Away from it all, and never have to fear.

The gates are ahead, take my hand and lets go fourth into the abyss.
Smile like you mean it dear child,
Never let that leave you for it is the only thing you have left.

Be happy dear child, for I am just watching you.
Let your wondering eyes take in every last detail of this place,
Take your memories of all the pain and misery and toss them away.

Come dear child, and sit down for a bit.
Look out over the vast hills of this place and tell me what you see,
Let the beauty of this place fill you.

Take this one rose dear child,
let that be the bond between us.
Never lose hope for you are safe with me at this place.

Sleep now dear child,
for when you wake I will be hear.
To show you the way so you know longer have to cry yourself to sleep at night.

I'll watch over you dear child,
hold your fear in my hands and protect you.
Trust in me dear child, as I do in you.

Forget the bad words and screaming toward you and come along dear child.
Clear your little mind and drift off here on this hill,
I will watch over you dear child never fear that I wont.

Take my hand dear child and I will never let you go,
I'll show you the meaning of happiness.
Trust me dear child I will protect you from your fears.

Shield you from the screams and anguish in your heart,
wipe away your tears dear child,
and sooth your broken heart.

Take my hand dear child,
and run far away with me.
I will show you the way.

I will protect you from the dangers that are to come,
shower you with love,
and take away your pain

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something I just came up with hope it's good

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  • Word--Warrior
    July 27, 2007

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    great!

    Aw, hun, you sound like a kindred spirit! Your life seems to have parallelled my own, in many ways...I wish you all the peace that only Jesus can give you and I hope one day He reaches out His hand and you are not to proud to take it! Take care...WW


    • ravenblade18
      July 27, 2007
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      thank you for your support and wisdom. when that day comes I shall take his hand with pride


  • trytothink
    July 26, 2007

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    Sounds nice ... makes me want to go with you! I liked the imagery of this poem, and like the peace you have described to want to give out all over. Nice write and i will read more!


    • ravenblade18
      July 26, 2007
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      thank you for your support I'm glad that this poem is better I went out on a limb on this one, thanks again


  • Mk gautam
    July 26, 2007
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    Wonderful and touching

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