My eyes are involuntarily closed,
Yet my heart still beats against my chest.
I feel you all around me,
But your gone, gone to be the best.
Your fingers trace my body,
But are you really there?
Goosebumps plague porcelain skin,
I'm losing sight of your terrified stare.
I'm struggling to hold you,
I'm struggling to love you,
I'm desperately clinging to us as we are.
I'm struggling to hold you,
I'm struggling to love you,
I'm struggling to believe you havent gone to far,
Your away from me, away from me,
In the silence of tradgedy.
My blood is insignificant,
My life is already ended.
You've fallen, your laid to rest,
But i, on you depended.
My skin is so warm,
My insides colder than Hells' fires,
You slipping into blackness,
The root of my sleeping desires.
I'm struggling to hold you,
I'm struggling to love you,
I'm desperately clinging to us as we are.
I'm struggling to hold you,
I'm struggling to love you,
I'm struggling to believe you havent gone to far,
Your away from me, away from me,
In the silence of tradgedy.
I'm pulled to reality,
With you lying here.
Your body is cold and empty,
Looking at your corpse is looking into a mirror.
YOu must live on,
Live on in my memory,
Never to disappear,
Never to let me be.
I'm struggling to hold you,
I'm struggling to love you,
I'm desperately clinging to us as we are.
I'm struggling to hold you,
I'm struggling to love you,
I'm struggling to believe you havent gone to far,
Your away from me, away from me,
In the silence of tradgedy.
Author notes
this is what i think of, as i listen to the song, creating my own with tears rolling down my cheeks.
A contest entry
- Niki FM by dream5111.
300 points, ended July 27, 2007, 5 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a beautiful poem, very sad, you did an amazing job, did the person you are writing about pass away? just wondering.
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wpw thiis is amazing! I really don't know what to say. you really seem to have written this from the heart. you did a great job. keep writing.
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this is really good! I loved it!
you did really well! I'm proud of you!
good luck!
~JennyPenny~
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"My eyes are involuntarily closed,
Yet my heart still beats against my chest.
I feel you all around me,
But your gone, gone to be the best." is my favorite part good luck
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