Leaving me breathless, you tease me to no end.
I can't get enough of this forbidden sin.
Under the stars, Inside a car, Especially in my den.
I have to have you in any way I can, even if can't win.
Simply addicting, I always want more of this sin.
And only you can fulfill my desires with your skin.
Trust isn't required, Not for this feeling within.
This artificial love, It's all I crave in the end.
This obsession, known as Lust, is my deadliest sin.
And it is on this night, That you would be my end.
Author notes
chapstick, Option 1.
Option 4 Lust
A contest entry
- Come Closer (options contest) by Forlorn Dreams.
525 points, ended July 26, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Wow this is excellant!!! I kinda knew what you were talking about at first ... but I didnt know that it was lust period. I just thought it was sex lol. But then I am a little dim. But it was beautifully written in my opinion. No wait ... it's a fact lol. This is a great piece. Good luck in Kelceys contest!
Megan -
A confession, an obsession indeed.
Aju Mukhopadhyay -
Amazing, such a creative way to describe this! I love the stars part. This may sound bad but this is my favorite sin. The flow was excellent. I just simply love this, I'm sorry but I can't think of anything else to say, im at a loss of words. Thank you for entering, best wishes!!! This reminds me of a good friend of mine, Bobby. His name is Shadow Heart on here. You are both amazing poets!
Kelcey -
Excellente'
WOW! Powerful-Words And Poem!!!(U Should Add A picture).. All I Can Say is 'This Is One Sexy Poem'....lol....Great-Job, Inspector-Gadget!!!! lol....'God Bless You In Every way'.Love, Shirley ann shaw-raytown,mo...............................
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