chiselled morning horizon's
bay-keeping ocean depth
silent expanse awakens
skies endowed orange red
morning fresh
embeds
pristine thoughts
rejoicing
His blessing consented
embraced
Author notes
The wonders of life-giving nature.
In a list
A contest entry
- Sunsets Are Best {Shared}, Sunrises Are Best {Alone} by Death of the Author.
725 points, ended September 2, 2007, 46 entries
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Do you feel the day?
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Excellent
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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ah lovely!
you captured something so beautifula nd so pure, many have tried, but this trully took my bretah away
I saw the images as clear beautiful images, not as cliches and annoying gimmiks, it really mixed togeher beautifully and made such a power and pure image
Well done, I really enjoyed reading this
It wasn't cliche, HOORAY!
good luck and the contest
and thanks for entering -
There are many unique phrases that I like in this, chiselles morning horizon, skies endowed, pristine thoughts rejoicing etc. Thank you for entering and good luck x
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Your poem is a beautiful instrument of the peace of God the way i see it and the light sifting through your metaphors. Lots of light granted in consolation. A positive contribution. Like my husband who gives so much meaning in giving and receiving.
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This makes me glad I wake up at dawn...it's so beautful...the sky at that time has so many colours and the air smells cleaner...and dew...I love dew!
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Morning's the most wonderful time of day - one that so many seem to waste by sleeping in cause they were up late the night before. Loved your wonderful words that describe this time - great flow and liked the brevity and variance of the length of lines.
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grannyeri
Thank you for your time and much appreciated comment. Need to arrive for work early in the morning, as I have too many students that need my attention during the day! Have a blessed day.
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I love the title. It's that descriptive of an unveiled beauty, truth, or overlooked Source that I would call "God". The debut PROOF in a secular interlude.
Personable, kind.
Wonderful piece.
*Form*.
Yes. It is a red door to this subject. I'd go through.
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Thank you for this lovely piece and WELCOME to the site! We all have learned so much.
Warmly, CookieZeal
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CookieZeal
Also a much appreciated thank you. I believe that roads do not cross accidentally. My students have also been challenged to write! Thank you for guiding me - I have two 'fears': not acknowledging comments with points [stars and applauses] and wasting points [not because of not wanting to part with earned points, but because someone special gave me some!]. You also have a Lord blessed day!
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