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Submissive Cadence

Twist me within glazed eyes,
  rhythmic compliance for your love.

Heart's tune, a metronome
  beating cadence to our every step.

Lured into waiting arms,
  as I tango into submissive bliss.

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    July 26, 2007

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    Awesome,

    I love your short verses, and ofcourse all your poetry I've read this far. This rocked the all poetry house down. Congrates on silver, shine on~


    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~


  • Matt Holck
    July 26, 2007
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    rhythmic compliance

    I like that

  • HeavenScent4U
    July 26, 2007

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    wow, this is gorgeous sweetie but i would have chosen it for gold, not silver very beautiful and full of love and wonderful imagery. congrats on the silver. be well and be blessed

  • luckynsincere gold member
    July 26, 2007

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    I am blown away! WOW! This is a great piece. It was seductive... alluring and captivating!! Thank you so much for sharing this with me

    Mel


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 26, 2007
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    this is one great poem dear poet

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