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End

when time stops
the animals kill
family's are missing
the sky is bleeding
the ocean is dry
and
the ground is on fire
and
no plants are alive
the end is here
but
there is no god
no devil
but you and yours
that hold you
a bond
to this sad 
place in your mined

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 1, 2008
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    Great poem. I wrote a poem like this when I wass younger. You need to work on your form a little bit. Loved this part: when time stops the animals kill family's are missing the sky is bleeding the ocean is dry