Shimmering;
moonlight casted - silver reflections -
radiance - living dead;
dancing; undead sirens.
Tango
del muerte; to endless time -
passing through now and never -
faith spins slow in hands of forsaken fates.
Author notes
Hell if I know. There it is and there I go. End of story. Enjoy.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE~~~~~PAY IT FORWARD! 10/20/30 by luckynsincere.
425 points, ended July 26, 2007, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Tengo que decir que este es genial! Buena obra! Me gusta que usaste un poco de español en tu poema. "Tango del muerte"
I have to say that this is awesome. Great work! I like that you used a little Spanish in your poem. "Tango of Death" -
frozen and moving
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this was a very interesting poem. it was quite beautiful and full of imagery but the dead part kind of blew it for me, nothing personal, just my frame of mind i guess
congrats on the gold, job well done 
be well and be blessed
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this is one hell of a poem
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WOW! This is a great write from you. I love it! The wording is powerful and so full of confidence! I am thrilled. Even with the limit of 30 words... you managed a masterpiece!!!
Mel
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