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Time Has Stopped

life rocks
the sky sings
the birds are dead
and
the ocean moons
time has stopped
and
now we are gone.

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  • Blooming Poet
    April 1, 2008

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    I have imagined this a hundred times, but it never bothers me, cause I know I will be with God when time stops. beautiful little poem, great use of words. thanks for entering