In the quiet of a moment
I hear the ticking of time
to see the star shinning bright
Only to see another day wasted
as the sea washes in the tide
the sun reaching full circle
An albatross and falcon fly high
full sail to the sky.
Oh full moon, call my name tonight;
I want so badly to be heard
by my chidren again.
Quietly I walk on the sea shore
Desolate tears, fall, single on my face...
One by one we pick each other up
Albatross, sea gull, sister & sun
Together and yet so far apart
Years, miles in our hearts
Together, yet so far apart....
A contest entry
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375 points, ended December 28, 2007, 80 entries
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It sems that music is on and the words are emerging from the nature ..what a depth and what a flow of the muse here bringing a kind of soothing touch to the eyes and soothing touch to the soul as well..Indeed a very soft journey of the heart is here revealing the magic of the poetry here.. a beauty of life you have portrayed here in the magical words of your poem here.....The concept is made very clear through the poetic mastery here bringing a kind of the depth of this universal phenomenon that is called life through the immagery and metaphors..a great poem indeed...
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thank you kindly for your grace and humble take on this piece. I appreciate the visit and comments given.
Tamara
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I love this, very moving.
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With pen to paper you have you have written some very interesting thoughts here. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you. Keep that pen handy dear poet. ~Midnight Lace
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This is such a beautiful and sad write. So full of strong images and heart, so tender and loving.
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thanks for your tender comment and visit and loyalty. I appreciate your kindness.
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This is a lovely poem filled with so many wonderful images. Loved the birds of longing here... So good to see you writing again, Tamara.
~ Nicolette
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many miles of tears flow now dear, my Debbie is gone.
thanks for the cheer and visit
Tamara
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