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Graveyard of Fame and Glory

Tears Burn my cheeks and a voice from the past tells a story
Of fame and fortune all around, and a faint memory of glory

Whispers in the dark tell a small tale of a hero
One who stood and fought with only sheild and arrow

One that wanted, and needed like all people real
One that stood for their life and would not conceal

Tears dry, the burning stops and life begins again
The ones who stand in the shadows look for the light to begin

The stars shine brightly and light my path away
Maybe the sun will shine brighter on the new day

There I sat and wrote this story
In the graveyard, of fame and glory

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  • nocturalis
    July 26, 2007

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    Hmm nice.

    I like the atmosphere of forlorn glory, my favorite, I think, is the ending, leaving me wondering if the writer had a vision of it, or something along those lines.

  • Hopeless13
    July 25, 2007
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    Cool

    Although I don't understand it, wording is great!