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Go On Away

Go, go, go.
Go on away.
We aren't waiting for you.
This air is charging
and every degree
will push you down,
and eventually
shatter and melt you like ice.

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I don't even know what's going on with this one. I hadn't written anything in a little while. I could really use some feedback on this piece.

Critical reviews are VERY welcome.

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