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[Suicidal] Dream

The universe changes beneath us,
'til you and me are no longer we.
Our once strong love has become a fading memory,
and this way of life can never stand to be.
A changing world has changed me,
You stayed you and apparently I became her.
No longer was I good enough in your eyes.

Another suicidal dream,
love story turned horror.
The monster; my heart,
attacking my soul, no longer whole.

Thought I could forget you,
thought I wouldn't care.
Do these tears look unhurt,
not from a shattered heart?
Do you see the loaded gun your words hold,
and the knife that stabs with each twinkle in your eye.

[another suidical dream,
  a love story turned horror.]

And with each word written,
and each page turned.
It's one page closer to the end of the book I call Life.

Author notes

umm yeah whatever. not jsut about some dude either by the way even if it sounds that way.

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  • ravenofdarkness
    July 31, 2007
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    nice good write


  • WishMeAway--x
    July 25, 2007

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    i like this.
    especially the end.
    And with each word written,
    and each page turned.
    It's one page closer to the end of the book I call Life.
    .

    amazing.love.♥