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How could you show me the way? *an anti-war song*

How could you show me the way?
I said how, when my trailer cant even say
And the wheels, they wont start rollin'
Till the moon rises again

I said how, how could you show me the way
when our flag is standin' in the way
I said how, when the cat chases the dog
When you cant shine hope beyond the fog

Right now, I cant even see
Till the fire blinds no more
And I cant even walk
Till the bodies uncover the floor
And I cant even hear
With all the noise in the sky

How could you show me the way?
I said how, when my trailer cant even say
And the wheels, they wont start rollin'
Till the moon rises again

I said how, how could you show me the way
when our flag is standin' in the way
I said how, when the cat chases the dog
When you cant shine hope beyond the fog

Well the road, it is closed
And i sit and watch the show
I doubt it'll ever be over
The destination, it ain't gettin closer

So how, how could you show me the way?
I said how, when my trailer cant even say
And the wheels, they wont start rollin'
Till the moon rises again.

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  • DancingShadowCorpse
    July 29, 2007

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    Pretty good for the most part and the message was really sad. A sad piece indeed. Thank you for entering!