a volcano underlines the surface
"i wanna see the shady side to it all"
"it's not all mysterious," she says
as she pulled on her clothes
talking to her reflection
she sat on her bed
dark long hair falling down with her while she lays on her back
"now those are mysterious"
she whispers to herself
a star winks and she closes her eyes
by the lake in the woods, she sighs
"maybe i will meet a little elf and he'll bring me into his town and we'll drink and have parties all year"
she reaches for her blanket and shuts her blinds
a tiny elf sits on a branch
watching her sleep
the star that winked draws closer to the elf
a new day dawns...
Please tell me what you think
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nice
more story style then peotry, but i like your writeing style, i just started writeing poetry a feew months ago, the first one i wrote was 'Pain is love' after my ex took my daughter to california, but keep up the writeing,
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