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My First Play

A young mans dream
Or a little boys sceam
Either way it doesn't matter
For this play went with a shatter
And I with the lead role
My part in which I complemented a hole
Tis was my dream for this part
It took a life time to learn the art
To memorize my hard core lines
In which I cherished like foreign wines
My blocking in which I did master
While the others went to disaster
For there minds where in the skies
Trying to fight off buterflys
A little nervers I guess they be
For little of them can act like me
So we rehersed for days and days
As we all went and mastered our own ways
And I mastering quicker then the rest
Some would say I was the best
But when performance time came
I put the rest to shame
As the audience stares in shock
For my perfection as a silent space rock



Author notes

Don't complain about the spelling i is dumb like that. But yes my first play I was a space rock I did nothing but sit on the stage.

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  • Gossamer Guile
    July 25, 2007

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    This was a very cute poem. I was actually going to comment on the spelling, but I see you've already covered that in your author notes. The ending was my favorite part, and made me laugh. You were the best...for you were silent. A master at memorization indeed. Great write, and thank you for entering my contest.