Sweet honeysuckles drip sultry
sensations of tasty friendships.
Longings of sadness call hearts
together for encouragements lift.
Horrors divine encrypted hand
settles upon burdened souls.
Masking dark devils magical
realm to hide joyous faith of love.
Whittled bones rest silently still
craving peaceful moments glow.
Angelic choirs begin heavens sounds
singing glory for weary souls exhaustion.
Wings develop upon timid calls
grown from faithful warriors battles.
Homeward bound with happy hours
as enemies wrestle to win a losing fight.
As we cheer on the sideline of life
rescuing ghostly winds of change.
Holding our sweet friend in our hearts
to forever love her gentle tears away...
Author notes
for the intergroup contest
A contest entry
- Really?no way! [Anyone anywhere] by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
375 points, ended June 28, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful
this is very well written i could feel all the different emotions as i read. This is really good thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck -
Nawr, beautiful & simply such elegantly said.
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Thank you sweetie,glad you liked it...A joy to hear what you think...Always
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amazing
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Thank you sweetie...Appreciate it much...
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This shows so much of the heart behind the words! Both beautiful without a doubt!
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Thank you hun...a blessing indeed...
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an excellent piece with good imagery and metaphors...so much feeling and passion...bravo!
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Thank you my sweet admirer...I am glad you enjoyed...
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Excellent
Very touching and wondefully written. Wonderful images painted for the mind.
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Thank you penman always an honor to hear your thoughts...
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this is beautiful well done love its just amazing xxx
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Thank you Laura...Glad you liked it babes
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awww this is a wonderful dedication i loved the wordings and emtions that were in it. you are truly a wonderful caring person and i love this poem because it shines your heart out for everyone to see and feel. well done hun
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Thank you sweetie for your wonderful word...A real joy you are...Blessings sweetie
~Cheryl~
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