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His Girl Part 2

He's chasing after her, the drive of the kill urging him on.
He can taste her fear.
He leaps for her and lands on her.
She howles at him but he doesn't really hear her.
She is his mate some part of his brain screams at him, but the beast wants to taste her blood.
The beast has control tonight and there is nothing he can or wants to do about it.
He feels her paws kick him in his jaw.
He chases after her again, enjoying the chase.
But he knows when he getrs tired of the chase he will kill her and she knows it as well.
He puts on an extra spurt of energy and swipes at her hind legs.
She feels the air as he barely missed her legs.
He knows where she is headed, so he turns her in a different direction.
She can't believe he is trying to kill her.
But then again this all a dream isn't it?
He pounces in the air and lands on her.
They roll a few times and when they stop he is on top with his fang bare an inch away from her throat.
She whimpers hoping that he won't kill her but as looks in his eyes, she sees a beast, a monster and not the kind, caring guy she met and spent a few days with.
He tears her throat out and enjoys the smell of freash blood.
He licks it up.

He jumps out of bed.
He is covered in sweat and he can't believe that he dreamed of killing her again.
He has to figure this out before he kills her for real.
He lays awake with the dream as real and vivid as ever in his head.

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  • Jessica Lyndsay
    July 30, 2007
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    Awsome I love your poems!! You have talent!! Keep up the good work!!! Jess


  • BornWithAPen
    July 25, 2007
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    i must really take the time to read more of your work, now im kinda hooked