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Remi Red

Tender
Sweetness
the nectar of my Love
Drink my Passion
Climb the heights of my Ectasy
the silence surround my temple
with only the feeling
left of the heat...down below
above the storm clouds
are Rain Drops
cooling sensations
deep as the Abyss
so Blissfully
how can I refuse you?

The temptation grows stronger

bound by Lust of red silk strings

around my ankles

dropping

drenching wet...

my silhouette trembles

from the coldness

breathe...

breathe deeper...you tell me

faster...

there

ooohhh

right there

it is hidden

beneath my wings

I spread them openly to you

my addiction is overwhelming

only to find myself with a hangover

drunk by what you have given me

thick lacquer

laced with the power

to overcome me

I adore 

the screams

I wanted more

it was no accident that our paths have crossed

now my LIPS and I shall wait

for your

return

 


 

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  • darell
    December 8, 2007

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    Sweet decadence..

    and passion reighs in this erotic and
    delicious poem. I was taken to another dimension
    in time where all the props were perfectly placed.
    Now here we are, alone and together as I drink
    my fill of your scrumptious Remi Red.


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      December 8, 2007
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      Thanks baby

      you are my Remi Red....one of my favorite drinks I appreciate your sweetness in many ways you are truly a wonderful man and a wonderful friend to me.

      All my
      E

  • New-n-Improved
    August 27, 2007

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    One of my Favorite Drinks

    If I ain't drinkin Seagram's Gin 102 proof, then I'm drinkin Remy fuckin Red. Now you got me. This is going to be my favorite poem by you, until you put out another one that moves me like this one. This is about to get printed and put on my mirror right now. Damn, I'm hot. That's why you are Tha Incredible 1. Stay incredible baby and keep it hot.


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      August 27, 2007

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      lol....

      You are spoiling me with these comments, but don't stop...I like it!
      Thank you so much... and
      E


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 26, 2007

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    hey i didnt know this was in the group shame on me sis i am sorry i love the hell out of this you did more than words can say yo so good with this i am running out of words time for me to find new words for these lyrics very very aggresive with emotional passion ~ julia ~


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      July 26, 2007
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      lol

      Thank Julia, It's ok, I know everybody get tied up sometimes, even me...so we cool. U know this, right?
      You are so Real and Honest, I thank you for me striving to do better with my writing, not being ashamed of expressing myself to this world.
      Much luv and respect,
      E


  • onesugar gold member
    July 26, 2007
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    This is beautifully done
    I loved it from start to finish
    I was drawn in.
    Hugs onesugar


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      July 26, 2007
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      Hugs to you onesugar

      Glad you liked it...I feel in love with this picture, I had to do sum with it. thank you sweetness.
      Ephiphany


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    July 26, 2007

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    Thank you SIS

    I knew you would give me some



    Okay now I am drunk


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      July 26, 2007
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      LOL

      u drunk now, sis? Gre8...here's one more
      Hope u can handle it
      Thanks for the coment, when u sober up....we'll celbrate some more.

      Ephiphany


  • Jamaica
    July 26, 2007
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    Beauty in words.

    Poetry is an expression of the imagination and I must say u got me tripping shorty.


    • AddictiveTRUTH
      July 26, 2007
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      Hey Jay....

      wow, you like it that much, huh? Glad to see u were here. I really miss you. Holla back
      E


  • AngelicSinz
    July 25, 2007
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    love the flow of this!


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    July 25, 2007
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    This poem is just as tasty as the picture, the colors ( I love the red) just allI think I will need a drink now

    XXJeannette

    Do you save me a glass of this Nectar too SIS!!!
    Don't keep it all by yourself

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