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passion singing in the sky

i see my life making a turn
a turn for better or worse?
a question i will know when the day comes
a life i live as crazy as anothers
a story well worth it and truly an inspiration

im confused and so its true
im loosing control and
courage is a gift i may reseeve, if i accept the strength
to be the best of who i can be
to be a so called part of the answer to the truth
to be the best sister daughter and lover
to be a friend to the loved ones im gifted to know of

smiling at the thought of life
beleaving i can keep a smile
even when my heart is on fire, burning in pain
love will over come

my eyes will see the unseen
my heart will break and mend
passion will sing in the sky

i will find a friend in a so called imagrey of an enamy
with a gasp of air in a drounding soul
with a smile from a broken heart and
the thought of always knowing u'll be ok

my eyes are filled with tears and memorys flash through my mind
i smile at the thought of you
the thoughts of you smiling when you look at me
i think of all the could bes and
could have beens andall the what ifs
and all the suprises along each and every path
i would never take it back
and theres no such thing as why

this is the question but not the answer
nor the truth just a suprise and an adventure
selfish not but loving true
not to prove but to explore
to be an example of myself
to open the door with no hinges

to be and not -to not be
to beleave...and to listen.....shuuu.........
....to passion singing in the sky..

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  • Tony El Great silver member
    October 16, 2007

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    When you put the first two lines of the first stanza together, it's not worded like a question. I really like the fourth, 7th, and 9th stanza. You have lots of typos:

    another
    i'm
    receive
    believing
    imagery
    enemy
    drowning
    you'll
    memories
    bes - not a word (I think of all that could be)
    beens - not a word (what could have been)
    surprises
    there's
    surprise
    believe