Do you remember her?
The girl that was always happy
The girl that was always laughing...?
Do you remember her?
The girl that was never sad
The girl that gave you all she had...?
Do you remember her?
The girl never wanting to say goodbye
The girl hoping you will stay by her side...?
Do you remember her
The girl that lost 15 pounds
The girl that was lost in any town...?
Do you remember her?
The girl that was depressed for so long
The girl that had just made ONE stupid wrong...?
Do you remember her?
The girl never wanting to be with her friends
The girl that wanted you to hole her until the end...?
Just answer one simple plea
Do you remember me?
Please tell me what you think
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That's amazing. exactly how i feel. it's SOOOOOOO truthful
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I really like this. "Just answer one simple plea, Do you remember me?" People will always remember you, even if you don't think they do. It kind of seems like your trying to say your invisible but don't ever forget that your not. Anyway your poem was amazing.
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That is amazing i feel just like that now i have a boyfriend i feel he's changed me but i don't want to live without him i know you poem isnt egsactly like that Lol Well done!
x
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simply...
amazing lovely write.
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Thank you for your reply on my poem, I am here to return the favor. (and glad that I did)
Loved your poetry! Hope to see more soon!!!
Becks
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I really love this- your use of the one repeated line is perfectly placed. It really stuck to my heart...it's so sad- I can just hear the whispering in desparation...very beautifully written.
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great
i love it. its go good and i can relate a lot. thank you for your comment on my poem. im adding you to my favorites =]. best wishes.
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