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Nothing Can Compare

Midnight dress, discarded
Moans its inadequacy
Mourns

Crimson rose, cast away
Burns with envy
Blackens

You and I, entwined
Put all other beauties to shame

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For Lorika

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  • Poopa Thug
    November 22, 2009

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    Eh

    Lol. I think the idea behind this poem is entertaining is sweet but that it isn't really as good as your usual stuff. Although I might be strongly biased given history.


  • Kuranya gold member
    September 8, 2007

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    I love that last line, there are many loves that can put beauty to shame, marvellous little piece you have here

    Karen