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In the Rain

No one knows the pain I feel inside
No one knows the things I hide
And it hurts too much to explain

~Chorus~ So I'll just walk in the rain,
play in the rain, cry in the rain,
and I'll just dance in the rain
to forget it all

Here I am laying down at night
missing good memories and holding on tight
Just tryin to let go of the pain

Wishin' I wasn't this way
Wishin' I'd seen better days
This is drivin' me insane

~Chorus~ So I'll just walk in the rain,
play in the rain, cry in the rain,
and I'll just dance in the rain
to forget it all, to forget it all
          oh
Imma walk in the rain, Imma play in the rain,
Imma cry in the rain, and Imma dance in the rain
  Just to forget it all

Author notes

mmk.. not one of meh best ones, but it'll have to do.. cheesey much?? yeah i thought soo... but i goota tune worked out to it.. its someting like a jam band or alternative rock or whatever but i think its good..

this kinda fits in alot of options.. u kno those days where you just kinda want to forget everything? yeah i have alot of them and crying, dancing, walking, and playing in the rain all kinda make me forget hehe

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  • L.e.l.
    September 14, 2007
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    Thank you for entering my contest. Sorry the judging is taking so long. Good luck.

    -Blue


  • ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-
    August 20, 2007

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    humm i really like this,, and i love the rain,, its like the best thing in the world!!! thank you and good luck!!


  • just a voice
    July 27, 2007

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    This is great. It kinda reminded me of the sond "Behind Blue Eyes" by The Who. Dont know why really. They dont seem similar at all but this made me think of it. Maybe I'm just crazy. I dunno. Anyways I loved this. Great job.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 25, 2007

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    aww this was awsome kiddo. it had a sad element to it and the imagery and feelings held within it were strong. a wonderful write well done and best of luck in the contest...but dont replace your crazy mum
    he he
    Xx Your crazy mum xX

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