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Fire dice

Take my hand
as I lead you all with me
Come to the hidden land
of make believe and fantasy
but this isn't a fairytale
this is something much, much more
this isn't about a adventure trail
no this is about demons galore

for this is a long walk down the twisted stairs
into the ice covered walls of shangri - la
another step down and your almost there
in the circus halls betweeen the stars

this isn't your everyday circus though
cuz these clowns don't keep you happy
their all about getting you to know
your a dead, unWed sappy
and even though your chewing on maggots and worms
you don't yet realise
that you've met morte's terms
and with the carnival folk up in the sky

but though your dead you don't get to stay sleeping
this is the dark neithervoid of reality
all that work, running and house keeping
made you think you could snooze and defy gravity
but your not gonna have time for that now
its wearing your soul out with 72 thousand miles of rides and site seeing
forever down with the clown
only thing thats different now is that your not breathing

then just when you thought you'd seen everything
you see a super huge big tent
welcomes a sassy arsed richcie into the arena ring
and be the star of the main event
people queing to get to see this
but your in a line on your own
and a long hand comes out of the mist
welcoming you as the star of the show
before you refuse and try and change your mind
the masks volunteer's are chaining you to a boarded wheel
the ringmaster tells you this is for your every crime
and you thought you'd died already but this is still real
for this is the right inbetween earth, heaven and hell
this is where we decide who's going where
it don't matter if you scream, wriggle and yell
because we're mad already, painted faces and red and black hair

only the undecided remain in this place of ours
with the wicked clowns and shadow J3ztaz
to taunt your soul through limbo and the stars
with unknown pain that no-one can measure

the path is almost finished, walked and compleated
but rolling this 6 sided cube will tell the eternal sacrifice
will you have forever happiness or get forever defeated
only one way to tell at the roll of the fire dice

as it rolls, bounces and turns
you grit your teeth till they crack
as it slowly stops with the deadly flame that burns
you see you're going to hell - without coming back


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Sh4doJ3zta-Chazie
25/07/07
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Author notes

this is more of a tribute to my favorite group, though its only just been written.
hope you enjoy
and if by any chance like ever
whuts up Jay and Shags hope you like

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    July 25, 2007

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    Thank you for entering.
    It wasnt exactly what I was looking for.
    No fantasy hell for me.
    Excellent write though.


  • Sorath
    July 25, 2007

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    Wow I love this kinda hell. Clowns, game show torture and parasites you don't have to catch yourself. Great write, I love the twisted circus idea and crazy clowns! I love the ending line to the piece 'you see you're going to hell - without coming back' It just gives the feeling of being forever trapped. Great write and good luck!

    Sorath


  • LostShadow
    July 25, 2007

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    Very nicely done. I loved the whole flow and the beginning of it was just wonderful "Take my hand
    as I lead you all with me" so sweet .

    I love the way you write

    Keep up the great work

    Emma


  • whispering shadow
    July 25, 2007
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    I ment to say like if ever jay and shags pop by like whuts sup hope you like yeah