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Moments of Happiness

Capturing a kiss from a loved one
As it's blown across your way
Reaching out for a ray of sunlight
On a radiant summer day

Hearing a child’s laughter
And seeing their very first smile
Waiting excitedly for their return
Always going that extra mile

Autumn leaves falling everywhere
Crunching under your feet
Winter branches almost bare
Watching from a parkside seat

Snowflakes melting on your face
Softly covering the ground
Disappearing as fast they fall
Glistening white around

Moments in life we wish to keep
So fleeting don’t always last
Memories are what we have alone
In the present and the past.

07/24/07

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  • Dark Fire
    August 5, 2007

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    Wonderful

    Memories are what we have alone
    In the present and the past

    How true that one's memories can keep them going, and they are the only one who knows it. Beautiful write!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 3, 2007
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    Moments in life we wish to keep
    So fleeting don’t always last

    Memories are what we have alone
    In the present and the past.

    What a balanced images you portrayed here with a beauty of the poetic words..I love it..thanks for such a heartfelt entry in contest..



  • Katyv
    July 26, 2007
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    Very good


  • 2lullabyhaven
    July 25, 2007
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    I love it, a special piece that's also true. lol


  • Candy6
    July 25, 2007
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    Excellent! Rhymed well.

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