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i regret

How can i explain, my biggest regret in life
I was not your friend, your lover or your wife
I acted out my anger, took it out on you
No Iam left broken my heart feeling blue
I didnt give us a chance, I though you were all same
How could I be so Wrong, Iam the one to blame
You loved me so much, but I would not let you get near
All the pain and horror I had suffered over the years
Everytime you touched me, my night mares came back
I had been abused ,love was what I lacked
you understood, but I pushed you away
you held me when I cried, day after day
I never gave you a break, but you never left my side
I snuck out to meet others, you suffered from my lies
How can I have not seen, how much you really cared
I should of been a wife to you, I know I was unfair
Iam sorry for the pain, the tattered heart i have left
My darling I want you to know, THIS WAS MY BIGGEST REGRET
I still do love you

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  • Crimson Lotus
    October 29, 2007

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    I love this poem, I love the appology, but I hate that it was an appology because of cheating. I know what it's like to be cheated on....and it's not a good feeling, Otherwise this is a very lovely poem.

    Thank you for entering my contest.


  • Lick On Her1275
    October 22, 2007

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    unfortunately my dear poet you did not read any of the instructions because i said no damn trophies pieces only and i loved this until i saw the disrespect of the trophy!


  • XHollowXEyesX
    September 24, 2007

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    this is such a sad write, I love how made the piece flow so beautifully. you realy expressed yourself and the emotions.
    Thanks for entering
    All the best
    ~Hollow~


  • forbidden-colour
    September 22, 2007
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    Awh.
    That's real sad.
    Especially the last two lines!

    thank you for entering.
    xxx


  • Beating gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    I very much understand where you're coming from in this piece. It is so well worded. There are a few typing errors though, so you should read it through.

    Unfortunately, this piece doens't follow the rules, so I can't consider you. Sorry!


  • metal freak 13
    August 23, 2007
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    You expressed your self really well. I in a way understand very well.

  • maggy1126
    August 13, 2007
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    wow... I really loved it it was awesome... you express your self very well...I love everything but this is my fav part of all, cause its the truest to me
    I didnt give us a chance, I though you were all same
    How could I be so Wrong, Iam the one to blame


  • Poet of Dreams
    August 12, 2007

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    wonderful. absolutly wonderful. i loved this. this is very much what i was looking for. i especialy love how you completly break from form and ryhme with the last line....perfectly written


  • TwiztidMaggot
    August 8, 2007

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    wow, this is DEEP! I love the emotion you wrote itno this! you did a great job writing it! Good luck in the contest! Keep up your great work! and thanks for your great comments on my poems!

    Crimson


  • TaintedBeauty
    July 25, 2007
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    Wow...
    I can only imagine what the pain from this is for you.
    This had to be a horrible time.
    But you have penned a beautiful write.
    "you understood, but I pushed you away
    you held me when I cried, day after day"
    I loved this set of lines. Very nice!


  • tawk gold member
    July 25, 2007

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    Wow this is so sad. I could feel your pain. So filled with sad emotions and love. Great write and good luck in the contest

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