Aye, twas a sailin'
a sea full 'o salt
'n me parrot twas a whistlin'
a tune from above
'n dee crow's nest
I stood on dee poop-deck
'n reached for me flask
'n thought 'o dat lady
I no longer had
'n took a swig 'o rum
'n Aye, twas a sailin'.
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Aye, you plundered the power on that bit o' shine! I kinda felt like you were portraying the classic Jamaican accent, or at least where I live that's how peeps portray it. Great job!
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Good job! Very piratical style.
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oh twas a fine salty write if I ever did hear one!
n for 'at I be green with envy (or maybe I 'ave meh a a corpse fulla skurvy) good work matie!
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Lol
I love the way youve written it phonetically, it made me feel as if the pirate was talking to me personally. an old salt relating his lost love, i love it
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'n Aye was like Aya a like it! Short, sweet n light ^^
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I started to hum this and imagined an old Disney cartoon with some goofy-looking pirate swabbing the deck! Nicely done, with a catchy beat.
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he he a mind of a sailor talking here..do you sail.
reminded me of pirates of the carribean...dont ask why i work strangly that way lol.
an awsome write well done
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lol, thanx sis. also, thanx for considering my poety in your media contest.
much appreciated.
-Pap.
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