[ like leather,
I shrink when it rains]
as if pessimism dripped
from dip-dyed skies,
(and in I curled,
avid avoidance)
I dangle limp as death,
so very high strung...
Author notes
hehe, at this time of morning, it probably only makes sense to me.
A contest entry
- Quickie... 10 spots/ 20 minutes/30 words.. hurry get your spot! by luckynsincere.
425 points, ended July 25, 2007, 7 entries
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the was a nice little poem. dripping with device. Nice work, enjoyed it thoroughly...
Creatress
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sorry for the delay, the site went down last night
This is a well written piece. your wording is profound! Perfect entry. Thanks for your entry!!
Melanie
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welcome back
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welcome back
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wow
excellent take on your given prompt. no, it makes a little sense to me to very well done. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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forgot these.. Catch!
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Cool spin from the prompt. Loved this poem. The metaphors and imagery was developed well, and were profound.
Stellar!
Best of luck in the contest
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sort of confusing but very nicely penned!! your presentation is so good, the word usage is amazing!!! much luck (thought u hardly seem to need it!)
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Your prompt is: clothes line
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