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I can do that

I don't need a T.V.
to tell my children what to think
I love their own minds'
ability to create

so I chose
I chose to liberate
from that lifeless babysitter
where kids crawl before dinner

and in the kitchen I cook
something better than what's on the food channel
and I invite my neighbor over
instead of shooting him with a .22

no, I don't need a T.V.
to tell my children how to act
I can do that
yes, I can do that.

A contest entry

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  • McRae by nature
    August 13, 2007

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    I have to agree with you on this one This was a really good piece, especially that first part about creativity. I was raised without Television and it kept me active and artistic. I love that

    Carrie


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 25, 2007

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    wow this was awsome and captivating. i loved how you wrote this...like the mind of a parent. i think that you took the prompt and made something beautifal and captivating. i loved this write it was strong and powerful. and the thoughts within it were awsome.
    well done and best of luck.


  • Papyrus
    July 25, 2007
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    I'm working on it...