frustrated,
i throw poetry
at walls-
bursting
into strange
spaghetti
patterns
it’s like mixing
every colour,
hoping
to find
magic.
Author notes
20 words.
In a list
A contest entry
- Overnight Quickie PIF by ten thousand cicadas.
525 points, ended July 25, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical comments are most welcome.
Comments
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what an amazing combination of images. superbly done. loved the emtion.



