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crushed enchantments of colour--

frustrated,
i throw poetry
at walls-

bursting
into strange
spaghetti
patterns

it’s like mixing
every colour,

hoping
to find
magic.




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  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    July 25, 2007
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    what an amazing combination of images. superbly done. loved the emtion.