you were seventeen
i was fifthteen
those were just numbers
not reasons to keep us apart
you told me you loved me
that we were ment to be
i was young
and deeply in love with you
i moved away
that summer's day
but we stayed together
no one could come between
i was used by you
to do what boys and girls do
i trusted you
i believed in you
6 months with another girl
you crushed my world
i gave you everything
most of all i gave you my heart
i was the other one
a side girl for some fun
a cruel bet you made
about me being a freshmen you could lay
my eyes would fill with tears
your demands were my worst fears
the photographics you made me take
the shame you put me through
you were my boyfriend
i thought it would never end
but you made a whore out of me
you completely distoryed me
Author notes
my ex boyfriend cheated on me. used me to cheat on his girlfriend. and he asked me to take nude pictures of myself. he kept wanting me to do stuff because we "loved" each other. he had also placed a bet that he could have sex with me. he was the biggest asshole i've ever met, and sadly i was head over heels in love with him.
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wow...this is good..im sorry it happened to you...
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This is tragically beautiful. The one who commented below me is right, though: all we can do is learn from it. I will be glad of the day when boys learn to grow up to be actual men. But then I think the day will never come.
"my eyes would fill with tears
your demands were my worst fears"
I love these two lines; they're my favorite!
This is filled with lots of emotion and I'm sorry you went through something at a young age.
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Oh darling ... I am so sorry that you had to go through with that ... Being a freshman in highschool these days ... has come down to being a serious illness ... it sickens me to see young girls going through these horrible things ... just so assholes like that can have their kicks and push us aside ... I too when through something kind of like this ... but I am here to tell you ... Learn from it honey ... Learn from your mistake and use it to your fullest extent ... What happens to us in the past ... makes us women stronger for today ... I am so so sorry that you had to go through with that ... My deepest sympathy and condolences ... Very beautiful write however ... it was so sad ... but so well penned ... Good luck in the contest darling ... much luv to ya .... ♥Sparkeh♥
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