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Broken

I'm shattered, broken, yet somehow I always manage to fall apart...

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  • Antebellum
    July 14, 2009
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    short, and so sad.
    I can feel the pain in this piece,
    thanks for taking the time to enter,
    good luck.

  • Antebellum
    July 14, 2009

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    short, and so sad.
    I can feel the pain in this piece,
    thanks for taking the time to enter,
    good luck.


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 30, 2007
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    Sounds like my life, being broken but still able to fall apart