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Madame Death

She wears Saturn's rings
Around those iron fingers.
Jupiter's ruby on her neck
Inside that holds the silenced singers.
Venus is but part of the glitter
That adorns her chest,
But Earth is her favorite victim
Because it holds her interest best.

Vanity, gluttony, lies, and cheating
Pump excitement and glee into her being.
Her drugs she uses for a high
While her pets struggle to get by

Manson's knife
She uses for a scythe
Cutting down those
Filled to the brim with strife

The rot of human flesh
Is her preferred perfume
While she paints her perfect, deadly lips
With the bright red of blood.
Her eyes, the blue of the depths
That swallow men whole.

A cat's black nail
Stirs the world
When all is quiet
Bringing chaos to an otherwise perfect life.

And this is what she lives for;

Author notes

Really, really, really weird idea from me, but it was one of those that was harrassing me. Forgive me for my outspoken behavior.

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  • krymsin kyss
    October 19, 2007

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    wow. Very nicely written! Wonderful flow and imagery. Great write all around. Thanks for entering and good luck.

    Avec amour *~Krymsin Kyss~*


  • mourningmonday
    July 25, 2007

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    Damn girl. This rocked. But, I mean, using Saturn in the poem, priceless. This is one of my favorites.

    Besides, that last line was so powerful. Really ended it off nicely. XD