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Poetry on bar napkins

Yet again it happen
Yet again I'm hurt
Yet again it's hard
Ill get through it
I always do
I'm always the one left
Crying over the girl
Left with questions
Questions that will never be answered
Feelings I have to push away
Tears I try and hide
It's not easy
Getting over things 
Dealing with thing
Writing helps
But sometimes things don't come out right
Or you don't have your pen or paper
Sitting at the back of the bar
Alone
Trying to get feelings out
I'm left writing poetry on bar napkins

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  • The Harlequin
    July 29, 2007
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    *Hugs*

    Great poem hun. I really love the way you used the title as the final line too. It makes the whole poem go round in like a never-ending circle, which I guess is what you feel you're stuck in at the moment. Anyway, I hope things get better for you real soon. Keep writing and keep posting. Take care, Mxx