your here
your have always been here
you shadow dances by my side
dancing in the mirror
smiling like along time ago
i can feel you here
they are all wrong
your still here
in my heart
in my memories
they took you away from me
but im taking you home
you will be with me forever
my love
your smile
your eyes
even in death
i will never say goodbye
i will never let our love die
some say im crazy
to hold on to you
but ill never let you go
i will never let you fall
into the darkness
i will always love you
i will never forget your smile
when the years fly by
they dont see you
but you are right by my side
your always in my heart
you will be with me forever
my love
your smile
your eyes
even in death
i will never say goodbye
i will never let our love die
i wont let our love die
i will never let you fall
into the darkness
one by one they die
but real love always stays alive
A contest entry
- Lyric Re-write by McFairy.
950 points, ended September 4, 2007, 33 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It's intresting...very emotional. Even though it's basically saying the same thing as the original song, It doesn't make it any less emotional. Wonderful job, dear. Keep on writing.
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great stuff i enjoy evanescence always very deep meaningful and some what powerful lyrics.
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I dont feel like there was much of a huge change in this, yes the lyrics are different bust still stating the same thing, thanks for entering though
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