She entered the flower shop
only wanting a single rose
to give to her boy friend for their date
as a soft nudge in hopes it would take their
their relationship to a new, intimate level.
The florist was unexpectedly gorgeous,
but it was those blue intense eyes
that really made her feel a strange tingling.
He asked how he could help her
and she told him she wanted a single red rose.
Smiling, he lifted his hand and mysteriously produced
the most beautiful rose she had ever seen.
Then he mentioned this was a very special rose,
one with powers to bring incredible pleasures.
At first she felt embarrassed and confused,
but had no capacity to resist when he came close,
slowly stroking its silky texture over his face.
Trembling, her insides felt waves of fiery passion
flow like a river, even when the rose touched her clothes.
Closing her eyes, biting her lips, he gently explored
each inch of her body, sending such surges of excitement
through each inch he caressed.
His words speaking of her beauty and soft allure skin
created a burning between her thighs.
Her mind was so dizzy, body so aroused to the point
that if he didn't stop she knew it would lead to volcano eruption.
However, she had never felt such a deep and incredible pleasure before,
couldn't begin to ask him to stop
and when the rose reached the place where her thighs met,
the screams of satisfaction nearly shattered the windows.
Panting, she opened her eyes,
as the florist held the rose in front of her face,
returning to behind the counter without saying a word,
while in her stunned state of afterglow
she bought a dozen roses.
A contest entry
- Delightful Fantasy Land Care To Join Me (semi quickie) by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended July 25, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I have the impression of hypnosis from this write...very sensuous and just erotic enough to keep it interesting...only a couple tiny typos...Line 10, he asked 'he' how he could help her..?; Line 20: blouse AND dress?...other than that...makes me feel like fresh flowers are in order for tomorrow...maybe red roses...maybe...just one.. ...Peace, Rhonda
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Thank you for the nice comment and pointing out the typos
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OMG This was amazing
I'll take a doze
Enjoyed this beyond measure.
Wow. Where is this place
this thank you so much for entering
This was fantasy talent at its best.
Luv ya
Delila
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Thank you so much for the great comment.
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Soo good
This is original and soo, very sensuous. Well done.
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Thank you for the great comment.
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LMAO, this is AWESOME, I'll have two dozen, please...WOW....I like that this has a mysterious storyline, and I like these kind of writes from you
....lol
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Wow! Man you sure know how to leave a great comment. And to think he didn't even charge for the special delivery
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I'll order two more then!
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My goodness. I never realized you were such a rose lover.
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