Sleek, lengthy strides
black, coated wrap
hung taut on
broad,
tapered
form, disguising
delicious deft,
adept in fiery eyes
smooth in supple word
enticing, reeling me-----
captivated by
. . .the devil
Author notes
I generally avoid temptation unless I can't resist it.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie, 20 minutes, 10 entries, 30 Words. Beat The Clock! Mae West Quotes! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended July 24, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very nice! I enjoyed your descriptions of sleek, hung taut, broad tapered, smooth, supple." Nice alliterism with the Delicious, Deft, aDept. I like the presentation of "supple word[s]"
congrats on the silver!
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Ahhhh yes, this is a truly tempting write as well, nice work, and congratulations on your silver
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Beautiful take on the prompt, loved it
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Your prompt! Google Mae West Quotes and pick any one, just put it in your author's notes
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