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Premature Gravity

Skin-cracks show surface tension
& pawn-shop rosaries paint
Wailing walls into sand.

Bibles grow through
Propaganda nails,

As she hands you a pamphlet from
"bleeding" hands.
Dust falls from coat pockets,
and warmth is only a short
Condemnation away.

[Drenched in righteous gasoline,
As you kiss this apartment-complex salvation,
To prove you’re humble]

Inhale scripted prayers
Like honey & rum
As this pier crumbles,
& crushes heart-bones
Under white-foundation
& premature gravity.

Grave-site alter,
Bread crumb audience,
Molds.

& hopes they’ve swallowed correctly.

[Placebo martyr eats lye
To prove they’re clean]

Author notes

Lye equates to lie.

And yeah.
Playing on words is ma game, homes.

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  • EverxEnding silver member
    July 27, 2007

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    I like this poem a whole heck of a lot!
    It touched me on so many levels.
    Congrats! This is beautiful.


  • lavender shadows
    July 24, 2007
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    told you. yay! congrats!


  • Hadji Murad
    July 24, 2007
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    There are no words to describe the profoundity of this poem.


  • lavender shadows
    July 24, 2007

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    yay, you're in this too

    I ADORE "Bibles grow through Propaganda nails", that's amazing. Well, I actually love the entire piece. It's so amazing. (and I predict that Nate will adore this - I'm smelling gold in here lol)

    mhm. mhm. mhm.