13 years he's been hiding
underneath the trees
and the world's against him
Hitting his knees
with the sticks
with the sticks
13 years he's been starving
Missing his bowl of
cherry pits
cherry pits
with the staining qualities
13 years he's been dying
13 years he's been crying
and dying
and crying
and crying
and gone
gone gone
gone
end.
Author notes
Weird, unusual, random..
A contest entry
- Let me hear it by ravenblade18.
330 points, ended July 25, 2007, 10 entries
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Comments
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this poem flowed very well, it was great thanks for the entry.
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