Submitting upon lavender linen of passion, spiraling in writhes of ecstasy
Arched spine give rise of Striped taffy delight, pressing against tongue
Sensations send senses beyond marble jade floor, ethereally climbing
Impulsive convulsions from loin to nip, spring from comet tails flame
Beastly hunger transcend time and space, reaching plateau of Milky Way
Worlds spinning, arcing implosions amid sonic bangs of quasar
Black holes inhaling impossible mass of hardened rock
The moon melts honey sweet, dripping warmth of sun
Climax peaks, sending night shivers into vortex
Bodies collide against astral storm, sending stars falling
Author notes
Prompt>>> Link to the image:
http://home-3.tiscali.nl/~loveart/IMG0107.JPG
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A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration - over 18 please by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended July 25, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Silver To Gold Quickie Contest by Crystal Chanda Lear.
450 points, ended July 31, 2007, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You are still so very damn hot, maybe even hotter since I have been gone.
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Beautifully hot and erotic... I love the title too, didn't understand it beforehand but get it now. Tasty.
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That was gentle sexy.
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A really wonderful take on the picture prompt and a really fabulous poem. best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.
David
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mmmm very tantilizing my dear friend filled with true sensuality. I love all the cosmic inuendos of a stellar image.
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A very detailed and vivid write with excellent imagery. Wow, very nice. This is going to be so hard to judge. Thank you for entering and good luck Storm
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